The dark clouds are ready to burst
To quench the parched earth’s thirst
I love the pitter-patter of incessant raindrops
To inhale the musky aroma of earth that crops
Each spurt will write a verse.
© Ila Varma 12-04-2016
The dark clouds are ready to burst
To quench the parched earth’s thirst
I love the pitter-patter of incessant raindrops
To inhale the musky aroma of earth that crops
Each spurt will write a verse.
© Ila Varma 12-04-2016
9 replies on “Limerick #Dark”
Beautiful!!
Thanks Ritu
I can almost smell that "just rained" aroma 🙂
Thanks
Very nicely done!
betty
http://viewsfrombenches.blogspot.com/
Thanks for the appreciation Betty
Lovely – I have a limerick on my blog today as well. As the first, second and fifth lines are 8 beats long and the third and fourth lines are only 5 beats long in a limerick is the challenge to turn this around?
Beautifully rhymed!
Thanks Rashmi