The flower gifted
Instantly fell out
Regrets of losing
My love
Clouded my mind
Tearing my heart apart.
The dangerous cargo ship
Gobbled you
While fleeting in the sea
Leaving me torn.
Everyone inquired
I couldn’t speak a word,
I felt my tongue tied.
© Ila Varma 12-10-2016
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When loosing love the pain is unbearable.
I recognize the feeling of hurt that causes "I couldn’t speak a word,
I felt my tongue tied." The pain comes through in your poem well.
Thank u all
There is such a feeling of loss in your quadrille and you convey that feeling of being tongue-tied so well.
I m elated dear that you rightly felt the emotions, my writings has done its work
😉
How terribly sad this turned out to be ~ Sometimes silence is best response ~
Thanks Grace for stopping by