You traveled into my crooked life
Demystifying the clinging slime
Enthusiastic & charged was I
Trusting you would stay by my side
Stretch of trust smiled
Radiance of love sailed
Misunderstandings crept in
Slowly
Chipping the standing relationship
The scars were severe
Than the burns of a bullet
You stood composed
I was queasy & jar
Painstaking was the break up
Snatching life’s radiance.
© Ila Varma 19-08-2016
6 replies on “Break Up!!! #Poetry”
Poignant. Standing composed in times like these defines a lady. Those lines touched me.
Thanks Saru.
Touching, and very beautiful!
Thanks Amitjee
I know that my ex girlfriend is deeply attached to me, but she felt cheated and left me alone after having a sad conversation. I could make her understand that she is misunderstood, and our relationship came to an end. Now, I know that my girlfriend has realised her mistake, but I am running no contact rule, so that it compels her to come back to me and express her love once again.
Thanks…Don't over test, bring her back if both ou u readily want to be together